There once was a girl named Tiffany. She was the most prettiest girl in the whole grade 6 class at least i thought she was. Tiffany had long brown hair and thik black eye lashes.one of the most beautiful things about her was big brown eyes that sparkeld in the light.
She also had a friend named sophie she had big brown eyes and a clear white smile with bouncy black hair. One day tiffany came home and walked in the house bobbing her head side to side.She sat down at the table,sighed and looked at her clothing."whats wrong"asked her mom
"nothing"I answerd.I told her that the biggest dance in the grade 6 classes.
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Hey Brittany
The introduction to your story is very well done, you give great details about Tiffany and Sophie.
It is now a good time in your story to move toward the dance in the story, because it leaves us with a lot of questions. What dance?, Who will be there?, Why is it the best dance ever?
Continue with your work, because were looking forward to the final product, because it should be a good story when its finished.
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